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Máme napsat sloh o sobě a rodině,chtěl jsem se zeptat mám to dobře napsané? My name is Jan.I'm fifteen years old.I am tall and thin.I live in Prague with my family in Detached house.I have got a sister.My sister s name is Tereza.She is twelve years old.She is tall and slim.She has got blue eyes and long blonde hair.She plays tennis ,volleyball and dances.His name is Petr.He is forty-two years old.He is tall and he has got sports figure.He has got blue eyes and short hair.He goes on box.My mother s name is Monika.She is fourty years old.She has got blue eyes.She has got long light brown hair.She is small.She goes to fitness.We have got a dog.Her name s is Andy.She is seven years old.She is small dog.My family likes to ski in winter.In summer my family likes to go on trips.I love my family.

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